Saturday, November 27, 2004
Song of Beauty

Hair of black

Length of long

Words of smartness

In this song


 

Goof of ball

Nut of case

Short of stature

Long of face

 

Looks of good

Smile of bright

Teeth of shiny

Except for that one spot where

there's some plaque


 

Hadn't done any poetry in a while, so I thought I would grace you all with my brilliance. You're welcome. Hahaha. Actually, I wrote this at work yesterday. Yes, despite the fact that I work retail, and yesterday was the day after Thanksgiving, I had time to sit down and write such a work of art. I was in the back, by myself, for 3 hours, supposedly waiting to load TVs - but I only had 4 customers in those 3 hours, so I was bored out of my skull. And that unfortunate poem above is what comes from a bored Greg. Don't let it happen again. :-)


Posted at 09:51 am by Greg

Katriana
November 29, 2004   07:46 PM PST
 
HA!!! Plaque!!
God, that was too funny!
Thanks, I needed that.

And thank you for the sweet comment on my blog. :)
Miranda
November 29, 2004   09:57 AM PST
 
*smiles* I liked it too. Thanks for sharing. I'm bookmarking you for later when I have some more time.
Lyly
November 28, 2004   01:10 PM PST
 
hehe
smile of face
Hallie
November 27, 2004   10:14 AM PST
 
hehe i like how this one is worded. it's short and concise, yet to the point. and it's easy to understand too, since i cant' understand most of poetry. great job greg! and props to you for making it rhyme. that's the hard part for me whenever i do have to compose a poem.
 

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